Thlog 4

Talking about this “Portfolio” for the past couple of classes has put me on edge. It just seems like so much work in so little time. While we were in class when we were going over the handout on what he need for the “Portfolio” it was like DP just kept going on and on with different assignments we need. Even though we already have most of the equipment we need to complete this “Portfolio” it still seems like a lot because of all of the revisions we have to do and all the analyzing we also have to do.

What I am kind of confused about is the Reverse Outline which states “To facilitate your WP1 and WP2 revisions, I want you to “re-see” your papers.  One way you can accomplish that is by creating a reverse outline for each of your WPs.  Condense each paragraph into its main point and how/why it supports (or doesn’t!) your argument—one or two sentences is fine.  I suggest creating a 3-column table to do this (see below), but I’m open to other arrangements.” So what I am asking is I’m taking my WP1 stating what I was trying to argue, then take what I was trying to argue in each one of my paragraphs, and then tell you how it connects to my main argument of the whole paper? And then that’s it right? Then do the same thing for my WP2? This whole reverse outline is to be done before the revising of my WP1 and WP2 to help revise my WP1 and WP2 correct? With the “Revision Matrix” I feel as though it was pretty clear until I got to this chart.

Text from my initial WP submission: (a phrase, sentence, paragraph, idea, move, punctuation, piece of evidence, etc.)	An observation or question I received from De Piero or a classmate:	The change(s) I made to what I initially wrote: (ie, the change[s] I made to column 1)	How this change impacts my paper:
	“What’s the connection between these two sentences? How do these ideas connect?

I feel as though column 1, 3, and 4 was clear, but I don’t understand where column 2 comes into play. Is column 2 mandatory because it’s really confusing me and I don’t want to lose any unnecessary points.

Thlog 3

These past couple of weeks I feel have been super duper hectic and chaotic. With the Septa strike that happened, with finding out we’ll be stuck with Donald Trump as our president for at least four years, and with specially me getting into my accident. I just feel as though my focus hasn’t really been on school lately and my grades are reflecting that also. It’s just a lot trying to be productive towards things outside of school and still trying to focus on school at the same time. Even though I don’t have a problem with turning my work in on time, I still feel as though that my work is just mediocre because my all isn’t going into the work as of lately. It’s hard while getting into the groove of writing a paper and then you r mind just jumps to other things going on in your life. Do you think there’s anything to help that? That was a serious question any suggestions?

To me I think that the WP2 was by far the hardest writing assignment we did throughout this course. I felt it was kind of difficult trying to argue two other people’s arguments and still maintain a strong argument yourself. Also with this assignment it felt more difficult than any other assignment we had to include the course readings or maybe it was just me. I feel like a complete idiot for what I did on my WP2 even though it wasn’t intentional and I made an honest mistake I just made that mistake one too many times. With that being said only DP will know what that means. My WP2 grade reflected that horribly but I hope it doesn’t have a major major impact on my final grade and whether or not I pass this class.

Thlog 2

A very helpful activity that we did in class was the “nesting dolls” activity. Nesting dolls are a set of wooden dolls of decreasing size placed one inside another. They consist of wooden figures which separates top from bottom to reveal a smaller figure of the same sort inside which has another figure inside of it and so on. The nesting dolls were to help us break down our genres into even smaller genres. Everyone’s genres were so broad including mines until we did the “nesting dolls” activity several times because even after the first time doing the activity there was still some confusion. The activity really started to make more and more sense as we got assignment after assignment.

This “nesting dolls” activity really helped me with PB1A and WP1. As far as PB1A I would say it really helped me because with it I would have just talked about the broad subject of “social media” but instead I was about to break that broad genre down to specific genres inside of the super broad genre for example like Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram. As far as WP1 were we had to pick at least two different genres from (different mainstream media or pop culture) that focus on the same topic. Without the activity I think that I would’ve had two very broad topics which would have probably been very difficult to analyze. So I think this was a very helpful activity that DP came up with and should continue to use this activity in the future.

Thlog 1

When I first noticed this course was two classes in one it kind of made me nervous. I thought walking into class for the first time it was going to be an old dull professor. Well good thing I was wrong in that aspect. My professor DP is a very cool guy I actually like the way he teaches I might not like what he’s teaching but his teaching style in general is pretty damn cool. It’s like most of the stuff I learned in grade school was incorrect on an English stand point.

For example I was familiar with the word “genre”. Genre is often times defined as a division or separate class or even things that are regarded as having particular shared characteristics (conventions). Which that interpretation is correct, in Navigating Genres by Kerry Dirk she mentions “Genre is used to refer primarily to form, which meant that writing in a particular genre was seen as simply a matter of filling in the blanks.”. Also understanding what Lloyd Bitzer an rhetorician said “when something new happens that requires a response, someone must create that first response. Then when that situation happens again, another person uses the first response as a basic for the second, and eventually everyone who encounters this situation is basing his/her response on the previous ones, resulting in the creation of a new genre.”. Before this Eng. 101-108 class I only broke genres down as like music: hip hop, rap, country, urban, rock & roll, and like movies: horror, comedies, documentaries, etc.. Which are all genres but I was never was aware or taught that there was also “genres” within writing.

Understanding all these new defined definitions on “genre” they helped me break down different topics to make a selection on my WP1. I think without all this useful information the first half of this class/semester would be nearly impossible because all of our papers had something to do with it in some way or another.

PB2B

I choose a text about Jonnu Smith a college football player at Florida International (FIU) who got burned by his girlfriend Mary Gaspar. In my PB2B I will be identifying the different players that are involved in this article, I will also be discussing the different people/organizations that are impacted by this cruelty. I will be connecting this article I’m reading to Shelly Reid’s “Critical Reading Strategies” and then combining the “Doubting and Disagreeing” strategy with the “Taking Positions” strategy.

In this article the injured Jonnu Smith is deeply involved in this issue. He is involved because now he has suffered severe burns on his head, neck, back, a shoulder and an arm. To a result of these burns he now has to sit out the rest of the season. If I was in Smith’s position I would ask my girlfriend why would you do this to me? Why would you mess up my good season I was having? What if this messes up my chances to get into the NFL?

Another key “player” involved is Mary Gaspar Smith’s girlfriend. She is a key “player” because she caused Smith’s injuries and now she has to sit behind bars because of her actions. If I were her I would ask Smith why wasn’t you paying me attention while we were arguing? I would ask myself why would I stoop so low to do such a thing? What if I have to do some time because of my actions?

Smith and Gaspar’s baby could also be another player because the mom might have to do some time and not get the correct care the baby needs to stay healthy. Another reason this situation might break the parents up and the baby would suffer because it’ll be growing up in a broken home.

The whole FIU organization is key “players” including Smith’s coaches and teammates because they’ll be losing a major factor on the field in Smith. He made the midseason John Mackey Award (best college tight end) that’s a big deal in the college football world. If I was one of his coaches or teammates I would ask him, why would she do that? Why are you still with her after we told you that she was crazy bro? How we going to find your replacement? 

http://www.espn.com/college-football/story/_/id/18014878/florida-international-golden-panthers-te-jonnu-smith-season-suffering-burns-attack

PB2A

In my PB2A I will be analyzing and searching for different moves that Samantha Master made in her article “13^th and the Invisibleness of Black Women”

The first move that I noticed that Master made was when she states “What has emerged as common knowledge through the Movement for Black Lives is laid out clearly and plainly in the film: Mass incarceration and modern-day policing are mutations of American slavery that mean to maintain the economic, social, political and legal subjugation of black people to support the (white) American enterprise.” I would call this move “Damn that’s Everyday” I would refer this move to that because I feel as though a lot of Blacks have been getting sensuously killed lately. I think this helped the text because before she got into her argument she mentioned The Black Lives Matter Movement which has to do with the overall of the article

The second move that I spotted in this article is “13th evokes the eponymous 13th Amendment, which simultaneously emancipated enslaved Africans and laid the groundwork for their continued confinement and the forced extraction of labor from their bodies through convict leasing, Jim Crow and, more recently, “broken windows” policing and the war on drugs.” I would refer to this move as “Bringing Up History” I called it this because she brought up the history of the 13^th Amendment and what it did for blacks in history. It brought out more evidence and ethos that the author knows something about the topic she picked to write about.

The third move the author made was when she said “The abolition of slavery, “except as a punishment for crime,” is an insidious loophole in the 13th Amendment that provides an instructive framework from which audiences can better understand today’s crisis of mass incarceration: The U.S. has less than 5 percent of the world’s population and a quarter of the world’s prisoners.” I referred to this move as “World Facts” After all she mentioned “world” two times and having 25% of your population being incarcerated when you only have less than 5% of the world’s population is a whole lot. I feel as though the author made this connection because the movie “13^th” is about mass incarcerations.

The fourth move I noticed was when Master reminded us that “”13^th” boasts an impressive slate of organizers, historians, advocates, scholars and formerly incarcerated people who tell the origin story and contemporary impact of America’s hypercriminalization of black people, including the power of media to create narratives about blackness that were so terrifying that even black America took up the mantle to cage and confine our kindred in the name of “law and order.”” This move is called “Capturing Authorial Action” In my opinion it is called this because the author is stating her opinion. I assume this move was made so she could make her next move.

Her next move was “However, the film’s power is tempered by a glaring omission: black women’s stories.” I call this move “Authors Quote” This helped the author’s text because it was a good transition from the last paragraph.

Another move I noticed Master make throughout her whole article was her putting a lot of hyperlinks to other sites which made her argument even stronger and that she did her resource on the topic. I call this move “Stating Facts” It helped the article because it made me personally believe what she was saying even more by her citing other sites.

PB1B

When reading any type of literature there are different types of ways to read, depending on your likes and dislikes. The genre I choose to do my PB1B on is Hilary Clinton fit enough to run for President. Paul Waldman who wrote the article “Hillary Clinton is not very good at running for president. In the end, it probably won’t matter.” from The Washington Post. In this article Waldman states that “For all her many skills, Hillary Clinton is just not that good at running for president.” I chose the reading style of scanning.

Scanning- which means to look over a text briefly looking for the main idea/something specific out of the whole article.

• People may scan because they're not deeply interested in the topic
• People maybe interested enough in the headline or the first sentence of the article to find out what exactly the text is about

I chose this reading style because I wanted to first understand why the writer chose to say Clinton wasn't a fit candidate to run for President and they're reasons why. This article in particular caught my attention because of the title. The race winding down so close to election and I personally don't have to much of an interest in either candidate. Along with that I am very aware that this a very historical election. Being as tho Hilary Clinton would be the first female president and first "First Lady" to become president. In the historical aspect of Donald Trump he would be the first president to be elected with extremely limited experience in politics. I am interested in who will be the new Commander in Chief of my country but with all the negativity attached to both of their names the heading of this article by far caught my attention.

Neither candidate appease me but as stated before I want to know the negativity attached to there names. When I saw the title of this article I was curious as to why the author felt that's Hilary Clinton wasn't fit to be president. Not being a Hilary fan or trump fan I was not interest enough to read the article word for word, but I wanted to hear what the author had to say. I scanned the article for major points that I could comprehend not being very educated in politics and their jargon. Which is a method of a reader whom is scanning.

While scanning this article I came across a statement stating “For all her many skills, Hillary Clinton is just not that good at running for president. That doesn't mean she wont be good at being president, and its a reminder that the two are not the same thing.”. That statement caught my attention because of the title being 'Hillary Clinton is not very good at running for president. In the end, it probably won't matter.'. With this contradicting statement my attention was then redirected to this paragraph and its following sentences which could give me clarity of what he meant, which is also a method of a scanner.

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Depending on your likes and dislikes there are several different ways to reading. Scanning is a very popular way of reading. I chose to direct my writing towards this form of reading because it helps me to better understand text by picking out key points. The article I read was 'Hillary Clinton is not very good at running for president. In the end, it probably won't matter.' at first glance this article caught my eye even though I'm not very big fans of neither Clinton or Trump. While reading this article I came across a statement stating that “For all her many skills, Hillary Clinton is just not that good at running for president. That doesn't mean she wont be good at being president, and its a reminder that the two are not the same thing.” (Waldman). Which was a contradiction of the article's title.

PB1A

Troy Johnson Professor DePiero

10/13/2016 Eng. 101-108

Social Media

Social media has undeniably taken over the 2010s. With so many different websites and apps they are extremely easy to access. Social media is websites and applications that enable users to create and share content or to participate in social networking. The initial idea of social media sites was to connect different people from around the world. You can rekindle relationships with friends and family members from around the world. Since then social media sites have evolved so much more beyond that.

There are many different social sites today. Three of the most prominent social sites of today include Facebook , Twitter and Instagram. Each one has a different set up and abilities , but essentially have the same ideas and target audiences. The target audience for these sites are for the younger population. Generations born after 1970 are the general target , but it is also easy enough to use for people who aren't quite as tech savvy as the younger population.

The purpose of these three social media sites is to connect people from around the world with each other. In the last 2-3 years these sites, Facebook and Twitter in particular have become media outlets for news. You can watch news clips and skip through to highlighted events. More recently Facebook has created "Facebook live". With Facebook live anyone with a Facebook account can broadcast anything they are doing live in real time. This also includes news stations. I recently watched the second presidential debate through my Facebook live feed on one of the news channels that broadcasts to Philadelphia and the surrounding suburbs.

Social media sites for the most part have a upbeat tone. Of course it is a place where people come to express their opinions and emotions on different topics. They have a welcoming style, with applications having plenty of bright colors and animations. What makes these social media sites deemed as social networking sites is the ability to see what someone else is posting about in their life from anywhere in the world. They are to also share world news and news going on in your own area. I believe Facebook is the trademark and definition of what social media is today.

Today there are three prominent social sites. In my opinion I believe Facebook is the most prominent. Facebook serves its purpose and in my opinion it is the definition of social media. On Facebook you can create a profile. On your profile you can list your name , the city you live in, where you are originally from, along with your birthday and where you went to school. You can also post pictures and tag various people in the photo either people who are in the photo or that you want to see the photo. Unlike Twitter where you can only tweet 140 characters per tweet or Instagram where you only post photos, Facebook allows you to post both statuses with unlimited characters and many photos. You can add, accept and deny different friend requests giving you some control on who views your photos. As stated by the Investapedia website, who wrote an article about “Twitter vs. Facebook vs. Instagram”, with the information they collected they have come up with conclusion that “As of 2015, 72% of online American adults use Facebook. The site is especially popular among online women, 77% of whom are users of the site. In addition, 82% of online adults between 18 to 29 use Facebook, along with 79% of those 30 to 49, 64% of those 50 to 64 and 48% of those 65 and older. While its user base is dominated by those over 25, Facebook still has over 50 million users under the age of 25.”

Without question social media has dominated the 2010s. With so many different social sites circulating the internet, there are three which are most prominent today including Facebook , Twitter and Instagram. One of the main goals of these three social media sites is to connect people from all over the world. Social media sites are geared with a upbeat tone. Of the three social sites I believe Facebook is the most prominent & serve its purpose as the definition of a social site.

About me !

Hi my name is Troy. I enjoy listening to music, running, & playing football. I don't really like writing but I was always told that I'm pretty good at it. My major is medical studies and one day I plan on becoming a nurse practitioner. Also if anyone wants to lose any money in Madden or 2k come holla at me.